There
was a rhythmic pulsing sound, like hammers on metal, only distant, muted,
watery. The world blurred in and out,
revealing faces, sometimes; rooms, equipment and decorations, bright lights,
dim, flickering lights, then blackness.
The sound was constant, however, varying only in intensity from time to
time. It pervaded both the real world
and the dark world of dreams which ruled in between brief bouts of consciousness.
Is
it an engine? A piston? Someone pacing? My heart? Siren
pondered these things in foggy meditation, sometimes forgetting why she was
doing it, other times just focussed enough to be desperate for an answer, any
answer, she could cling to. Is it a
pump? A torture machine? Am I going to die?
It
was the kind of question that would not have bothered her much had she been
fully conscious. She’d have worked out
the general source pretty quickly and moved on to other things, but in the half-dazed
world after blacking out from pressure sickness it became all that
mattered. I must know!
Pound-pound-pound-pound-pound…
When
she finally came to properly she found she was lying in a decompression
chamber, staring through its thick glass at an ornate ceiling of carved wood
with a lit glass dome in the centre revealing the smoky darkness of the deep
above her. I’m inside the city,
she realised, her first clear, coherent thought. Her second was in response to the feeling of constriction around
her wrists and ankles. Manacles! She struggled against them, but the were
tight, made of some kind of hypostatickally reinforced brass, and there wasn’t
enough room in the chamber for her to move in anyway.
She let
herself roll to a stop, took a deep breath to calm herself and then stared back
at that ornate ceiling, preparing to wait, the distant pounding – Engines,
surely? – her only companion.
As it happened
she didn’t have to wait long, which was just as well. The ceiling was beautiful, but it couldn’t hold her attention for
long and, despite the apparent prospect of enjoying the mysterious sights of
the undersea world, nothing swam or drifted past the domed ‘skylight’ except
one small, dull, brown fish, which appeared to be following a patch of
colourless slime mould. She was getting
pretty close to her boredom threshold within just a few minutes.
So, when a
young woman first leaned over her decompression chamber and peered down at her,
Siren found she was actually relieved.
It didn’t matter that the girl was probably her jailer, or that she
worked for Marveille. What mattered was
that she was another human being and that, if asked enough questions, she would
probably divulge some information.
“Oh,” the
young woman said with some surprise as she realised that Siren was staring up
at her, “you’re awake. I wasn’t
expecting that.” She glanced off to the
side, as if checking for reassurance from someone else, or she could have just
been checking the time. Either way, she
nodded and then glanced down again.
“Well, it’s probably a good sign.
I’ll still need to do some tests of course.”
She spoke like
a Philosopher. Siren wasn’t sure if she
was the kind she should trust with her health, but since she was still bound
and sealed within a decompression chamber, it seemed her opinion on the issue
wasn’t going to be taken into account.
“Can you
speak?” the young woman asked.
“Last time I
tried,” Siren replied, then added, “this time too, it seems.”
“Sense of
humour,” the woman responded slowly, apparently jotting it down on a clipboard
she had picked up from somewhere just out of Siren’s field of view, “another
good sign, unless it shows signs of heading towards hysteria.”
“I’m not that
funny.”
The young
woman flashed a slightly patronising smile, then disappeared from view. She came back moments later carrying a
pinhole lantern which she shone directly into Siren’s eyes.
“Try not to
blink,” she said, as Siren did just that, then, after a few seconds, she put
the lantern down and made another couple of notes.
“Responses
seem good,” she continued, although Siren wasn’t sure whether it was for her
benefit or not, “and your hypostatick energy readings are healthy. Yes,” she smiled down through the glass, “I
think it’s safe for you to come out now.”
Rather than
take direct action to release her, however, the young woman gestured off to the
side and two large, burly men dressed in what looked to be brass armour
appeared to either side of the decompression chamber.
“Make sure she
can’t escape when I activate the release, then take her to the Academy.”
The men nodded
and Siren found herself tensing up, wondering if she could be quick enough to
escape, or not. As the woman activated
the release with a hiss of air and the sides of her chamber began to lift open,
she suddenly relaxed. There’s no
point trying to escape just yet, she realised, besides, I might be able
to learn something useful before I do.
The
decompression chamber slowly opened and Siren lay patiently waiting, much to
the approval of the young Philosopher woman, who smiled and said, “Very
good”. Despite this the two armoured
men grabbed Siren’s arms and hauled her roughly to her feet before she could do
it herself. She had just a moment to
get her bearings and see that they were in a wood-panelled medical suite,
before they spun her around towards the door.
“We’ve heard
about you,” the one on her right said in a thick accent Siren couldn’t quite
place, “so don’t be trying anything.
Come on!” Together the two thugs
dragged her out through the door and into a long corridor carpeted with lush,
red wool. The walls here were finished
in alternating wood panelling and marble and lit by the warm glow of gas lamps
in brass sconces. There were doors at
regular intervals and, equally regularly, though less often, were corridor
junctions beneath glass domes which appeared held up by golden caryatids. It was clear that Marveille had spared no
expense with this city beneath the sea.
Groups of
well-dressed men and women tended to gather in the crossroads areas, admiring
the view above them. One or two seemed
to be waiting impatiently for something and there we others sitting on benches
between the statues, reading, or staring into space. The corridors were not empty either, but various figures,
including some who resembled nurses, hurried along them from one room to
another and Siren began to wonder if she had, in fact, been held in some kind
of hospital.
The guards
took several turns and eventually they passed through a large atrium with a long
glass roof braced with lead. This was
the busiest area she had seen so far and it was full of wealthy-looking (if not
always healthy-looking) patients, visitors, doctors and nurses, confirming her
suspicions. Not a one of them seemed to
pay her or her guards the least bit of notice and so they passed out of the
hospital and into an enormous domed plaza that must have covered at least two or three square miles of the ocean
floor.
Siren gazed
about her in wonder, her feet trying to slow even as the guards pushed her to
make her go faster. Here the city could
be seen at its most grandiose, its most impossible, for the dome was filled
with all kinds of buildings and parks. There were actual streets here as well,
resembling many a street in the city above.
All was lit with ornate gas lanterns, the sky above the eternal midnight
of the oceans. She could see into that
darkness, however, as the gigantic spotlights that had led her to the city in
the first place lit up the many domes and spires of the rest of the city and
the walls of the underwater canyon it resided in.
There was no
shortage of people in this city. Siren
did not know where they had all come from but they seemed quite happy bustling
about in the streets, doing the kind of things that citizens of Shadow from
across the planet would be doing on any normal day. There was one difference she noted, however, and that was the
lack of truly poor people. There were servants,
certainly, and shop workers and machinists, but this city had no beggars, no
orphaned urchins picking pockets, no slums.
It ought to be ideal, but for some reason it sent a chill down Siren’s
spine when she realised it, dulling the glamour of everything she saw
thereafter.
At last her
guards brought her up to a large stone façade at the edge of the dome which,
apart from the lack of grime, or evidence of wear and tear, might had been
standing there for centuries. It seemed
so solid and its ornate carving, large windows and pillared doorways spoke
of tradition and great importance. Siren could just make out the ghost of
another dome beyond, assumedly housing the rest of the building.
Her guards
dragged her up the main steps, into a spacious and well-appointed reception
area and brought her to a desk where a sharp-nosed clerk looked up from a
ledger and eyed her suspiciously.
“This one was
just discharged from the decompression chamber,” one of the guards said, making
the clerk glance his way, “we were told to bring her straight here.”
“Oh, really?”
the clerk asked, his voice as sharp as his nose, “I’ll have to check to see if
she’s expected by anyone.” He began to
flicked through the ledger, “What is her name?”
“It’s Siren,”
Siren said, before any of the guards could make the attempt. “I assume I’m here to see Marveille.”
The clerk
stared at her in surprise for a moment, before flicking the ledger forward a
few pages and smiling, “Ah, yes. And
not just Marveille, it seems. You must
be very special indeed. Why, I can’t
think of anyone in all of Fracture who would merit an audience like this one.”
Siren felt her
heart beat faster.
“Why? Who am I to see?”
“No less a
personage than the president herself!”
“The president
of what?”
The clerk
raised an eyebrow, his expression clearly readable. This one’s a bit dense, he was thinking. Siren made a note of it for later.
“The president
of the Noble Society,” he said eventually with marked impatience, “you’re here
to see Doctor Barkham!”
So, some time ago I was given some advice to stop writing comments at the end of each episode as they may have been intimidating readers from commenting. Since I stopped doing that I think I have received one comment, which is less than the (admittedly very) few I had received before that. As an experiment, I think it is safe to say that it failed.
ReplyDeleteWith that as a given, then, I have decided to return to posting my comments after each episode, where there's something to say, anyway. Please feel free to add your own thoughts. If you're reading Shadow in any capacity, then I'd love to hear from you!
So, Fracture! Honestly, I had no idea I was going to be writing about an underwater city until about last week and yet it seems so right for Shadow to have one. It's fair to say that there's a good deal of 'Bioshock' in here and even the name is a bit of an homage, but I hope that there's enough here that's different to make it a worthwhile venture.
Also, Shock! I didn't see that coming either. Whose writing this thing anyway?